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The Clans Saga
The Four Clans
At the start of time only rogues and loners where in the forest.
Then the cats started fighting every single day. It was madness. The only
thing they could do was make a truce but that didn't work at all. Only
a battle happened and after that the ground was matted with blood and fur.
There were only four cats standing last. They slept where they fought that
night and awoke to a moonlight clearing from which there were cats from the
battle the night before and many other dead cats before then and they only said
three words. "Unite Or Die!".
So one cat stepped forward. He was an orange tom with a white muzzle.
He said, " I am Thunder, I hunt in the dense undergrowth and i live for the
trees and hunt voles and birds. I should rule the forest!" Then another cat
stepped forward and apposed and said," No! I am Wind, I rule the moors and
am faster than the wind. I reach every corner of the forest. I should rule
the forest!" Another cat stepped forward and gave more apposition to the
argument. She said," I am Shadow, I live in the darkness and only come
out in the light to hunt. I should rule the forest!" Then a tom said,"I am River,
the only cat that can swim, for i have more ability in this forest than you will
ever have. I should rule the forest and teach my ways!"
"No" ,A dead cat said. "You four will make borders, and boundaries in
your elemental place of your choice and you will lead a clan. If you make this
happen we will give you eight additional lives to lead your clan with.
You will lead for many moons to come, and you will make piece and order.
Come back in a moon and gain your lives for your clan."
The cats departed and set up borders and clans. they soon returned to
the clearing where they met the dead cats and soon gained their lives and a new name.
For which every leader will have "star" at the end of their name. The four leaders:
Windstar, Thunderstar, Riverstar, and Shadowstar will rule the forest in clans.
Forever they will live in clans and always to stay together.
STORY 1
Grayshadow's Lead
Grayshadow woke to a foggy sky and the cold of Leaf-bare. Knowing that Whitestar and his patrol spent the night in the den next to the warrior's so he kept quite. He could hear the noise of the Shadowclan warriors. He just thought of the past when Oakstar was alive to fall asleep again. "Grayshadow wake up", said Mistyfur. "What is it?" Grayshadow said. "It's time to get up that's what it is," Mistyfur sounded annoyed. Grayshadow had forgotten that Oakstar was to be buried this day. He walked into the bright sun, yet he thought to himself why is it so cold when the sun is so bright? As he walked out all of his clan greeted him. "I know this is hard for you Grayshadow," Olivestar sadly said,"It's hard for all of us." He walked even further to see Oakstar in the clearing being prepared by the elders. As they coated him with scents of flowers and closed his eyes Mistyfur yelled out, "I have an announcement to make," the clan looked shocked that she would yell out before the burial,"I'm expecting kits, Grayshadow's kits." All of a sudden Grayshadow wasn't so sad after all. "How do you know?" asked Grayshadow. "Trust me, I know my own body." Grayshadow smiled at her reply.
...One moon later
"Mossykit stop messing with Olivestar's tail please," Grayshadow angrily said, " He needs a break for once don't you think?" "No no it's fine Grayshadow I like the fact that your kits have taken a liking to my tail." Olivestar said with a smile. "Well ok but if they are too much for you just send them to Darkcrysis and let him tell stories to them." That was odd, Grayshadow thought. Usually Olivestar is serious in every situation, even just in the camp. Maybe he needs to be nice so all the clan will get use to him. Grayshadow then joined a border patrol. As him, Leopardheart, Windpelt, and Orangeshadow walked past the Shadowclan border Whitestar came to greet them. "What are you doing so close to the border," Whitestar said seriously but Grayshadow knew it wasn't a threat. "We are patroling the border!" said Leopardheart. "We are only a border patrol we are not hunting." Grayshadow said as he pushed Leopardheart out of the way before she starts a fight. "Well be careful not to step over the border." Then Whitestar disappeared into the forest again. When Grayshadow got back to camp he decided to have something to eat and then sleep. He picked a plump vole out of the fresh-kill pile and began walking to his den when Leopardheart jumped in front of him. "What was that all about!" Yelled Leopardheart, "He was threatening us." "No he wasn't Leopardheart he was only asking what we were doing. I didn't want you to start a fight." Leopardheart only padded away angrily. Grayshadow smirked and went to his den to sleep. When we woke up his kits were jumping on him. "Hey, what are you doing here? Where is your mother?" "She said we can come see you." Said Owlkit, " Yeah, she said you would like to see us as soon as you woke up." Said Mossykit happily. "Well I am very glad that you came to see me this morning, it saved me the trouble of having to go past the elder's den and get caught in one of Darkcrysis' stories again." Later on that day Grayshadow decided to take a walk past the Shadowclan territory, though he didn't cross the border. He then got to the entrance of camp and he had a vision. "Grayshadow", a voice called, " The clans need your lead to save them, if you don't help them they will all perish." Grayshadow looked shocked, " What do you mean?" Then Oakstar appeared with his father Longstar. " Hello Grayshadow, it is nice to see you again, this is not a good occasion we are meeting on though," he said with a frown," It seems the Dark Forest has tried to end the clans again, they have already battled Starclan but they lost, I bet they will be back." Grayshadow stepped forward, "Tell me more." Then Oakstar and Longstar disappeared into the night and Grayshadow was once again walking into the camp. Grayshadow had no idea what they meant. He thought it might have just been a dream but he decided to talk to somecat that knows about visions like that. As we walked toward the medicine cat's den entrance Olivestar stepped out in front of him, "How about you lead a hunting patrol Grayshadow?" Grayshadow hesitated, " Sure, why not." Later that day Grayshadow brought back 2 voles and a magpie to the fresh-kill pile. He remembered to go talk to Frosttail about his vision. He padded toward the medicine cat's den. "Hello Grayshadow," Frosttail said before she turned around," What are you here for?" "Well earlier today I had a vision. Oakstar came to me and told me that the Dark Forest attacked Starclan but lost and they will be back for Starclan! Could that be possible?" "Yes, it could be possible Grayshadow. Was it only Oakstar that told you." "Well, Oakstar's father was there. I've never met him but somehow i just knew it was his father." Grayshadow said uneasily. "Hmm. There must be a reason he came along with Oakstar. Maybe they escaped to tell you. Maybe it's true that the Dark Forest attacked Starclan!"
"Grayshadow wake up! Wake up!" "What is it", Grayshadow said as he rose to his paws and stretched out having alot of room to do so because the other warriors were out on patrols. "Grayshadow, Olivestar wishes for you to be on a border patrol", said Mistyfur. "Ok, I'll be right on that" Grayshadow said with a low breath. He walked outside into the deep heat and brightness of the sun. He stretched out as Olivestar walked up to him. "Are you ready for the patrol, Grayshadow?" "Yes, Olivestar, I believe so", said Grayshadow as he walked over to the rest of the patrol. After the patrol Grayshadow decided to bring fresh kill to his kits that were now old enough to eat fresh kill. "Grayshadow!", said Owlkit "I thought you were never going to visit again!" "I would never leave you." Grayshadow said with a slight smile. "I brought you fresh kill now go share with the others!" Grayshadow said tickled with joy that his kits were growing strong and healthy. Then a loud shriek broke out among the clan. "A rogue cat come to steal kits! He's in the camp!" Grayshadow rushed past a crowd of startled cats when he laid his sight on a very old gray cat. "Who are you?" Grayshadow said with stern reinforcement to his tone. "Get away you fools don't you know who I am?", Said the weird gray cat. "No, if we knew who you were we wouldn't ask", said Leopardheart as she lunged forward,"Should I skin this rogue?", she said turning to the clan. Mistyfur pushed the kits to the nursery. "I want to see Leopardheart hurt that cat!," said Mossykit. Mistyfur just grunted and pushed them into the nursery. "Leopardheart," Grayshadow yelled,"He is obviously helpless, what could he have done." "Get away from me!" said the gray cat as he squirmed to the leader's den. "Where is Longstar? I must talk to him! Now!" Grayshadow was shocked, he had only just saw Longstar moons ago with Oakstar in Starclan. "How do you know Longstar?"Grayshadow asked curiously. "Because, I am his medicine cat." Gasps stirred up among the ranks of the clan. "But h-how? Why?" the cats of Windclan said loudly. "What is your name?" asked Darkcrysis. He was the oldest cat in the clan now. He was sure to know the name of this cat. Grayshadow was astonished. "My name is... Swiftfeather. I am here to see Longstar now where is he?"ask Swiftfeather once again. "Longstar is long dead Swiftfeather. Even his son Oakstar is dead he died moons ago." Swiftfeather seem so surprised. Did this cat not know how long he was gone from the clan? "How can this be? Who is the current leader?" Olivestar stepped up. "That would be me, I am Olivestar" Swiftfeather stood up."Have you met Longstar before Olivestar?" "No, I have not Swiftfeather." "Does no one know who I am?"asked Swiftfeather with force behind his raspy old voice. "I have met with Longstar, in Starclan."
At the start of time only rogues and loners where in the forest.
Then the cats started fighting every single day. It was madness. The only
thing they could do was make a truce but that didn't work at all. Only
a battle happened and after that the ground was matted with blood and fur.
There were only four cats standing last. They slept where they fought that
night and awoke to a moonlight clearing from which there were cats from the
battle the night before and many other dead cats before then and they only said
three words. "Unite Or Die!".
So one cat stepped forward. He was an orange tom with a white muzzle.
He said, " I am Thunder, I hunt in the dense undergrowth and i live for the
trees and hunt voles and birds. I should rule the forest!" Then another cat
stepped forward and apposed and said," No! I am Wind, I rule the moors and
am faster than the wind. I reach every corner of the forest. I should rule
the forest!" Another cat stepped forward and gave more apposition to the
argument. She said," I am Shadow, I live in the darkness and only come
out in the light to hunt. I should rule the forest!" Then a tom said,"I am River,
the only cat that can swim, for i have more ability in this forest than you will
ever have. I should rule the forest and teach my ways!"
"No" ,A dead cat said. "You four will make borders, and boundaries in
your elemental place of your choice and you will lead a clan. If you make this
happen we will give you eight additional lives to lead your clan with.
You will lead for many moons to come, and you will make piece and order.
Come back in a moon and gain your lives for your clan."
The cats departed and set up borders and clans. they soon returned to
the clearing where they met the dead cats and soon gained their lives and a new name.
For which every leader will have "star" at the end of their name. The four leaders:
Windstar, Thunderstar, Riverstar, and Shadowstar will rule the forest in clans.
Forever they will live in clans and always to stay together.
STORY 1
Grayshadow's Lead
Grayshadow woke to a foggy sky and the cold of Leaf-bare. Knowing that Whitestar and his patrol spent the night in the den next to the warrior's so he kept quite. He could hear the noise of the Shadowclan warriors. He just thought of the past when Oakstar was alive to fall asleep again. "Grayshadow wake up", said Mistyfur. "What is it?" Grayshadow said. "It's time to get up that's what it is," Mistyfur sounded annoyed. Grayshadow had forgotten that Oakstar was to be buried this day. He walked into the bright sun, yet he thought to himself why is it so cold when the sun is so bright? As he walked out all of his clan greeted him. "I know this is hard for you Grayshadow," Olivestar sadly said,"It's hard for all of us." He walked even further to see Oakstar in the clearing being prepared by the elders. As they coated him with scents of flowers and closed his eyes Mistyfur yelled out, "I have an announcement to make," the clan looked shocked that she would yell out before the burial,"I'm expecting kits, Grayshadow's kits." All of a sudden Grayshadow wasn't so sad after all. "How do you know?" asked Grayshadow. "Trust me, I know my own body." Grayshadow smiled at her reply.
...One moon later
"Mossykit stop messing with Olivestar's tail please," Grayshadow angrily said, " He needs a break for once don't you think?" "No no it's fine Grayshadow I like the fact that your kits have taken a liking to my tail." Olivestar said with a smile. "Well ok but if they are too much for you just send them to Darkcrysis and let him tell stories to them." That was odd, Grayshadow thought. Usually Olivestar is serious in every situation, even just in the camp. Maybe he needs to be nice so all the clan will get use to him. Grayshadow then joined a border patrol. As him, Leopardheart, Windpelt, and Orangeshadow walked past the Shadowclan border Whitestar came to greet them. "What are you doing so close to the border," Whitestar said seriously but Grayshadow knew it wasn't a threat. "We are patroling the border!" said Leopardheart. "We are only a border patrol we are not hunting." Grayshadow said as he pushed Leopardheart out of the way before she starts a fight. "Well be careful not to step over the border." Then Whitestar disappeared into the forest again. When Grayshadow got back to camp he decided to have something to eat and then sleep. He picked a plump vole out of the fresh-kill pile and began walking to his den when Leopardheart jumped in front of him. "What was that all about!" Yelled Leopardheart, "He was threatening us." "No he wasn't Leopardheart he was only asking what we were doing. I didn't want you to start a fight." Leopardheart only padded away angrily. Grayshadow smirked and went to his den to sleep. When we woke up his kits were jumping on him. "Hey, what are you doing here? Where is your mother?" "She said we can come see you." Said Owlkit, " Yeah, she said you would like to see us as soon as you woke up." Said Mossykit happily. "Well I am very glad that you came to see me this morning, it saved me the trouble of having to go past the elder's den and get caught in one of Darkcrysis' stories again." Later on that day Grayshadow decided to take a walk past the Shadowclan territory, though he didn't cross the border. He then got to the entrance of camp and he had a vision. "Grayshadow", a voice called, " The clans need your lead to save them, if you don't help them they will all perish." Grayshadow looked shocked, " What do you mean?" Then Oakstar appeared with his father Longstar. " Hello Grayshadow, it is nice to see you again, this is not a good occasion we are meeting on though," he said with a frown," It seems the Dark Forest has tried to end the clans again, they have already battled Starclan but they lost, I bet they will be back." Grayshadow stepped forward, "Tell me more." Then Oakstar and Longstar disappeared into the night and Grayshadow was once again walking into the camp. Grayshadow had no idea what they meant. He thought it might have just been a dream but he decided to talk to somecat that knows about visions like that. As we walked toward the medicine cat's den entrance Olivestar stepped out in front of him, "How about you lead a hunting patrol Grayshadow?" Grayshadow hesitated, " Sure, why not." Later that day Grayshadow brought back 2 voles and a magpie to the fresh-kill pile. He remembered to go talk to Frosttail about his vision. He padded toward the medicine cat's den. "Hello Grayshadow," Frosttail said before she turned around," What are you here for?" "Well earlier today I had a vision. Oakstar came to me and told me that the Dark Forest attacked Starclan but lost and they will be back for Starclan! Could that be possible?" "Yes, it could be possible Grayshadow. Was it only Oakstar that told you." "Well, Oakstar's father was there. I've never met him but somehow i just knew it was his father." Grayshadow said uneasily. "Hmm. There must be a reason he came along with Oakstar. Maybe they escaped to tell you. Maybe it's true that the Dark Forest attacked Starclan!"
"Grayshadow wake up! Wake up!" "What is it", Grayshadow said as he rose to his paws and stretched out having alot of room to do so because the other warriors were out on patrols. "Grayshadow, Olivestar wishes for you to be on a border patrol", said Mistyfur. "Ok, I'll be right on that" Grayshadow said with a low breath. He walked outside into the deep heat and brightness of the sun. He stretched out as Olivestar walked up to him. "Are you ready for the patrol, Grayshadow?" "Yes, Olivestar, I believe so", said Grayshadow as he walked over to the rest of the patrol. After the patrol Grayshadow decided to bring fresh kill to his kits that were now old enough to eat fresh kill. "Grayshadow!", said Owlkit "I thought you were never going to visit again!" "I would never leave you." Grayshadow said with a slight smile. "I brought you fresh kill now go share with the others!" Grayshadow said tickled with joy that his kits were growing strong and healthy. Then a loud shriek broke out among the clan. "A rogue cat come to steal kits! He's in the camp!" Grayshadow rushed past a crowd of startled cats when he laid his sight on a very old gray cat. "Who are you?" Grayshadow said with stern reinforcement to his tone. "Get away you fools don't you know who I am?", Said the weird gray cat. "No, if we knew who you were we wouldn't ask", said Leopardheart as she lunged forward,"Should I skin this rogue?", she said turning to the clan. Mistyfur pushed the kits to the nursery. "I want to see Leopardheart hurt that cat!," said Mossykit. Mistyfur just grunted and pushed them into the nursery. "Leopardheart," Grayshadow yelled,"He is obviously helpless, what could he have done." "Get away from me!" said the gray cat as he squirmed to the leader's den. "Where is Longstar? I must talk to him! Now!" Grayshadow was shocked, he had only just saw Longstar moons ago with Oakstar in Starclan. "How do you know Longstar?"Grayshadow asked curiously. "Because, I am his medicine cat." Gasps stirred up among the ranks of the clan. "But h-how? Why?" the cats of Windclan said loudly. "What is your name?" asked Darkcrysis. He was the oldest cat in the clan now. He was sure to know the name of this cat. Grayshadow was astonished. "My name is... Swiftfeather. I am here to see Longstar now where is he?"ask Swiftfeather once again. "Longstar is long dead Swiftfeather. Even his son Oakstar is dead he died moons ago." Swiftfeather seem so surprised. Did this cat not know how long he was gone from the clan? "How can this be? Who is the current leader?" Olivestar stepped up. "That would be me, I am Olivestar" Swiftfeather stood up."Have you met Longstar before Olivestar?" "No, I have not Swiftfeather." "Does no one know who I am?"asked Swiftfeather with force behind his raspy old voice. "I have met with Longstar, in Starclan."